Score: 6

"This is a game btw"

submission: HopperMan

date: August 12, 2008

Im going to ignore the fact that you submitted this as a movie and not a game as it should of been. Please do that before I pass it.

Now on to the review.

You have a solid game engine going. Simple but still fun to play. I only played two levels of the game, but from what I saw it's good.

The things you need to work on are all graphic based for the most part. The art was alright but since Im hoping you re-submit this as a game you will be able to improve it. You could add some more detailed animation as well to make it look even better.
The stars could have a better shape to them as well so the player can see where he'll die by moving there.

Other than that just add some cool sound effects and this game would have been golden.

IF IT WAS SUBMITTED AS A GAME AND NOT A MOVIE!!!!!! >=(

Score: 8

"Damn..nice ending"

submission: Dining with the Devil

date: August 7, 2008

Great short story you told. The ending was great. Good choice.

I liked the style. Very bland but at the same time made the characters stand out more than the background. It also made your drawings and not coloring stand out more. However this had some problems with it.

Most of your drawings were great, but some looked a little weird, specifically the sniper rifle the guy was holding and the girl when she was aiming the gun at him and flashing her badge. Work a bit more on poses and you'll be fine.

The animation could have been a bit smoother at parts too, but major props for using a lot of frame by frame in your movie. It looked great even with a little choppyness.

Great job telling the story. It was very mysterious, though I saw it coming that the girl was a cop when I saw the gun. The ending was great. Very sad and told great.

Keep up the great work. How'd you do on the project?

Score: 9

"Very nice"

submission: Biology vs. Chemistry

date: August 7, 2008

Great idea for a movie, though not entirely original. I've heard the concept before, but the execution was brilliant.

The art was great. Very colorful without a lot of outlines. It was very easy on the eyes and stylish as well. The animation wasn't too shabby either.
The attacks is what made this movie for me. The different, and very nerdy, attack moves were just fun to watch because they were so corny. Creative attacks too. I laughed hard when bio dude sent out his HIV virus attack.

Other than that the only thing you could work on is your humor. Even though it was a very small part of this movie the humor that you tried to do came off a little dry. Im speaking specifically of the desert joke. But it's so small for this movie it's not even that big of a deal. Just had to mention it.

So overall a very nice movie. Keep up the good work.