dirtshake's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness Spy]

I don't like clones...but

This was alright. Not great, but not terrible. I'll pass it, but you have a lot to work on.

First - Animation needs to be faster. Right now it's too slow to hold the attention of people. Work on pacing.

Second - Audio. Something more than gun shots. Use background music and voices. I know madness doesn't use voices, but don't try to be a complete clone. Add some voices.

Other than that, this isn't too terrible. Just work on those things and you might have a good movie for madness day.

Ratcaller responds:

Hm...I could pump up FPS, but im not sure about the voices :/ Thanks for help :)

[IGOR: The Unhappy Clown]

Nice artwork

I loved the artwork. Very cartoon like, but it had it's own charm to it. It worked well. Dissapointed in the lack of animation though...very small movements, and most of it was just his mouth movements. But the animation wasn't bad, there just wasn't enough of it.

Try adding more animation to your next movie. With your art skill and will be great.

[Samus vs Meta knight:ssbb]

Could have been better

This could have been better, but don't get me wrong. You hae potential.
The most noticable thing was the slowness and choppyness of the movie. Things should be much MUCh smoother in a finished product. I watched it both on low and high quality as well, and there was no difference.

Other than that, just practice your animation a bit more to make more interesting fight scenes.

Good luck on your future movies.

dec-1310 responds:

I suppose i should put the movie's fps to 30 again.......

[The Anger of Animation 2]

Newgrounds wins again

Pretty good movie. The animation was very smooth and I liked the ending how you killed him by blamming him.
Original ending to an unorginal plot.

Pretty good stuff.

KobraEditing responds:

Thank you for the review...I am glad you enjoyed my work

[Fandito Movie Trailer]

Didn't get the point

Well....from what I could understand with my horrible spanish skills...

the world is in danger
our hero sucks

Am I right?? And what was this, a spanish project or is spanish your main language?

Meh, I'll pass it. Just because the movie could be promising.

[Lol Keys]

I chuckled

I liked the animation on the stick figure.

But you can do more with this. I see potential in you. Keep up the practice and you'll make something sweet soon.

Good luck.

[The Lost Gift Trailer]

PUT THE MOVIE HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Seriously, you have some kick ass talent. I don't care how big or long the movie is, put it on NG NOW!!!!
Your art and animation skills are over the top good. Everything is smooth, detailed, crisp, clean, anad GORGEOUS!!! It honestly reminds me of a Disney film, like Mulan or something, and that is a good thing.
From the trailer I couldn't tell if most of this was tweened animation or frame by frame, but either way, it looked good. Pleae, if the movie is even half this good, put it up here.

If your worried about the file size, email one of the admins your file. Im sure they'll put it up no sweat. I think they've done it before.
Or just break it up into chunks to keep it under the file limit. But with the quality of animation you have here, I say keep it one movie and try to get one of the admins to put it up.

Oh, and kickass song by the way. I love it. Listen to it everyday.

Keramazotti responds:

Thanks alot man.

[Rock, Paper, Skizzorz]

Pretty Good...

It wasn't bad. A nice little animation. The artwork, though simple, was clean and nice. I liked the plot, gave me a chuckle. Over all I enjoyed the movie, but I found a few things to improve on to make your next movies even better.

Lip syncing. It wasn't bad, but didn't sync up right at some points. Seemed like you tried to get in a different mouth for every frame and/or syllable. Just clean it up a bit, maybe change the size of the mouths. But that's easily fixable with more practice and patience. Im not the best at lip syncing either myself.

Sound was good. Characters had distinct voices. The mic cracked a bit, but I can't even fix that. The only thing I could say was make AQ's voice even more distinguished. Right now it sounds like the same person just going lower. It works, but MORE of it could make the character better and more alive.

Even with these, I liked the movie. I passed it. 3/5
Make some more.

helxliankid responds:

Thanks for the criticism. I'll be sure to work on these points for future cartoons.